by cjcenizal » April 4th, 2011, 8:33 pm
Hey moosemoose! The hard work is really showing man! You've accomplished so much. I'm going to give hard, honest feedback, and I hope you find it valuable.
1. The wild and crazy tracks are SO MUCH FUN! I really enjoyed going around the crazy loops, sliding up and down walls half-tube-style, and seeing this track in 3D space all around me was very immersive. This is the funnest part of your game.
2. On the flip side, none of the beginner tracks were fun. If I were you, I would eliminate all of the beginning tracks, and only have 3D tracks. In my opinion, these 3D tracks are the real strength of your game, and the flat basic tracks detract from the overall experience.
3. I think it will be valuable to try to really fine-tune and simplify your understanding of the ideal user experience. In terms of the series of user events and decisions throughout one play session, I can see a couple place where a user might feel stuck/confused. For instance, when I first started playing, I thought I had to buy a car. This brought me through the car-buying process, which took a few seconds. And then I wasn't sure what to do next... I couldn't find the "Race" button because it is grouped in with the other buttons.
I think it'd be more pleasant to be able to just start racing right away. There could be just a single big button that says "Race". You click it, and start racing... once the race ends, the feedback says, "You won $5,000! Spend it upgrading your vehicle." That type of UX is simple, it gets the player into the fun right away, and it encourages him to move onto the next step ("Spend your money to upgrade your car"), so he is taught the user experience loop that you as the designer are going for (race, win, re-invest in car).
Additionally, maybe it'd be better to unlock tracks through XP or Win Points or something... it seemed really counter-intuitive to have to spend money on a track... as if I somehow am the owner of a track?
I think you've got some really really fun aspects to your game. Keep it up!!